Aftermath
Aftermath
Their bodies are lying all over
the field;
Broken is the sword – shattered lies the
shield.
They’re lying and dying in mud made of blood;
They’re
crying and waiting to die.
Their
whimpers and screams tear the wind as they mourn,
Praising death
and cursing the day they were born.
They’re bleeding and needing
to cease and find peace;
They’re pleading and praying to die.
Their
faces turn pale and the red blood turns black;
They feel the night
coming and hold nothing back.
They’re breathing and leaving;
their souls flown and gone.
I’m grieving and pleading “Don’t
die.”
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"They’re lying and dying in mud made of blood;"
ReplyDeleteThis. Is. So. Powerful!!!
AhhHhhhh It is terribly tragic, but it is so gripping and conveys the overarching emotion so well!!
Because when I really thought about battle, I realized that it is more horrible than glorious and the common soldier is, in the end, with little hope to survive. The thought was so crushing, I had to write this poem.
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