Seventeen
Seventeen
How
does it feel to be seventeen?
Oh,
not much different than what it has been.
So
you don’t feel older, perhaps more mature?
I
feel like a wiser fool, that’s for sure.
A
wiser fool? That doesn’t make sense.
Depends
on your view – present or past tense.
Oh,
never mind, but surely you feel glad?
In
a way that’s resigned enough to be sad.
You
are very strange . . . but think – a clean slate!
It’s
good but too soon; it’s bad but too late.
Seventeen
is better than sixteen by far.
As
much as the sun is more than a star.
You
have more experience! Life is more clear.
There’s
just as much clouds as sun in a year.
Why
aren’t you more cheerful? You’ve conquered your troubles!
I
am not uncheerful, just not full of bubbles.
But
why? Why not take the chance – be ecstatic?
Then
I would have to call myself a fanatic.
There
has to be something really wrong with you.
I
prefer happiness that is true,
And sorrow unhindered by the
obligation
To paint on my smiles and fake my elation.
You see,
I am glad to be seventeen
But I’m also sad that all I have
been
For a whole past year is now quite behind,
And no matter
how I look I’ll never find
More than the shreds of me in the
past.
I wish that my sixteenth year could have last-
ed just a
bit longer. I don’t want to grow
Because growing older also
means to go
Away from your childhood into a new realm
Where
reason, not wonder, is guiding the helm
And steering your course
to stars that all lie
Upon the horizon, not up in the sky.
So,
yes, it is nice to be seventeen,
But I’m looking through tears
at the person I’ve been.
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This is a masterpiece.
ReplyDeleteI'm crying.
I have cried every single time I have read this, and maybe it just impacts me so perfectly because it is exactly how I feel, or maybe it is impacting me as it would impact anyone.
Simply spectacular.
And as I posted it, my thought was "Yes, I think my friend Ash will understand this. Maybe even more than I do." because it doesn't make me cry, and I wish it did.
ReplyDeleteThank you for putting so much into understanding that you came away with tears.